tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2113327012084450817.post5261514768524967751..comments2023-10-26T15:29:27.753+01:00Comments on Written In Exile: The Last EnchanteurIsabel Doylehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17974989548030799086noreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2113327012084450817.post-89402876275703458292011-09-25T16:27:04.656+01:002011-09-25T16:27:04.656+01:00I must say that your marvelous images had me going...I must say that your marvelous images had me going back and forth from poem to prompt picture. This really is a marvelous scene ... so very magical.Liz Rice-Sosnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14705708193546909432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2113327012084450817.post-16323710408017658902011-09-25T08:29:44.315+01:002011-09-25T08:29:44.315+01:00Ooooo! How good was that!Ooooo! How good was that!Stafford Rayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03048757515249725540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2113327012084450817.post-26237591461349543612011-09-22T20:45:53.587+01:002011-09-22T20:45:53.587+01:00very thoughtful wording.
enjoyed it.very thoughtful wording.<br />enjoyed it.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2113327012084450817.post-89827173254254765642011-09-22T15:42:54.832+01:002011-09-22T15:42:54.832+01:00His alluring charm and his paper cut leaves mask w...His alluring charm and his paper cut leaves mask well the poisons left beneath, bitten and lost in other scenes.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2113327012084450817.post-83560473110381609792011-09-22T10:50:05.301+01:002011-09-22T10:50:05.301+01:00I just read your alarming bitten-by-cat story on y...I just read your alarming bitten-by-cat story on your other blog and it is amazing to find that you can make poetry of biting fangs. Hope you're healing okay!Kathy B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/09475101089455608729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2113327012084450817.post-34849287562759816492011-09-22T09:53:30.379+01:002011-09-22T09:53:30.379+01:00Beautiful poem with a sense of mystery but also ra...Beautiful poem with a sense of mystery but also raw power, very evocative of the jungle - even though it be a paper cout-out one!<br />Thank you for your kind comment on my blog. The frangipanis are not out yet, but other fragrant flowers abound...Intellibloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2113327012084450817.post-298298310661254002011-09-22T06:06:54.463+01:002011-09-22T06:06:54.463+01:00Good one...I can see this painting come to life in...Good one...I can see this painting come to life in your words...a little scary, but I like it :)Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2113327012084450817.post-69988021976095065402011-09-21T14:27:45.223+01:002011-09-21T14:27:45.223+01:00Definitely one of my favorites this week! I love t...Definitely one of my favorites this week! I love the line "the transfiguration of serpents to leaves to trees to sound." I can hear a man with a Caribbean accent reading this for some reason!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2113327012084450817.post-81192431237142878002011-09-21T12:00:07.572+01:002011-09-21T12:00:07.572+01:00This is excellent stuff. Do you really need the a...This is excellent stuff. Do you really need the ambiguity of "if he has one" in the "His familiar" line?<br />It seems to me that the line and the image loses its force by your raising a doubt in the reader's mind.Doctor FTSEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10052101566471519778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2113327012084450817.post-27333893297679900932011-09-20T15:55:44.515+01:002011-09-20T15:55:44.515+01:00Isabel, I feel you inhabited the painting and its ...Isabel, I feel you inhabited the painting and its images, its creatures, a story truly told from the inside. You pried open its secrets. What a hypnotic interpretation.Marylinn Kellyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02759437467691163658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2113327012084450817.post-71927198205904159902011-09-20T09:03:52.855+01:002011-09-20T09:03:52.855+01:00It'll have the kiddies quaking in their boots....It'll have the kiddies quaking in their boots...or beds...Trellissimohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02283663872471564907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2113327012084450817.post-25275518696744088162011-09-20T00:57:13.425+01:002011-09-20T00:57:13.425+01:00You've got the shape shifting down pat...what ...You've got the shape shifting down pat...what a mystery..what to follow?? Children, beware!!Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2113327012084450817.post-18264817761790245452011-09-19T23:41:38.200+01:002011-09-19T23:41:38.200+01:00ha i like...a little enchanting a little dark...th...ha i like...a little enchanting a little dark...the man you describe stands in both worlds daring us tocome near...nicely done...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2113327012084450817.post-15976433810082756842011-09-19T20:26:39.622+01:002011-09-19T20:26:39.622+01:00Enchanting .......Enchanting .......Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2113327012084450817.post-10211904198853787702011-09-19T19:20:58.648+01:002011-09-19T19:20:58.648+01:00Holy cow, the maggies are hot! This is fabulous.Holy cow, the maggies are hot! This is fabulous.Maggiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00903678715925613725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2113327012084450817.post-36959053682880497022011-09-19T19:02:01.455+01:002011-09-19T19:02:01.455+01:00I think this could be my favourite-loved it!I think this could be my favourite-loved it!Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05912071192179983603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2113327012084450817.post-66085203597973360032011-09-19T18:42:39.447+01:002011-09-19T18:42:39.447+01:00Nice piece, with a fine opening stanza.Nice piece, with a fine opening stanza.Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13494219959077922220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2113327012084450817.post-68713406505959392612011-09-19T17:31:41.580+01:002011-09-19T17:31:41.580+01:00What a frighting figure you painted with wonderful...What a frighting figure you painted with wonderful and terrorifying imagery. Well done.Sean Vesseyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05509793249114004395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2113327012084450817.post-33324493831185874342011-09-19T17:30:02.781+01:002011-09-19T17:30:02.781+01:00This comment has been removed by the author.Sean Vesseyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05509793249114004395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2113327012084450817.post-57276141534335049572011-09-19T16:34:30.064+01:002011-09-19T16:34:30.064+01:00Chilling stuff
Anna :o]Chilling stuff<br /><br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2113327012084450817.post-61840828813124920552011-09-19T16:28:33.782+01:002011-09-19T16:28:33.782+01:00paper-cut leaves and punch out birds... but the ar...paper-cut leaves and punch out birds... but the are poisonous and dead, hiding fangs. <br /><br />Yummy! This is so tempting at first, one tentatively wants to follow... but I guess that is the point.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2113327012084450817.post-4753990020764775312011-09-19T14:48:33.471+01:002011-09-19T14:48:33.471+01:00Definitely alluring and persuasive...Definitely alluring and persuasive...Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2113327012084450817.post-44330921586419018302011-09-19T14:47:31.703+01:002011-09-19T14:47:31.703+01:00Wow, you did a great job.Wow, you did a great job.annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2113327012084450817.post-64398569705531516922011-09-19T14:10:53.111+01:002011-09-19T14:10:53.111+01:00I lovelovelove "man-dog-gorilla"...I lovelovelove "man-dog-gorilla"...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2113327012084450817.post-34135551192207289912011-09-19T13:11:46.885+01:002011-09-19T13:11:46.885+01:00Well done. I love working around the shapeshiftin...Well done. I love working around the shapeshifting idea, have done a lot of it.<br /><br />Coyote says he approves also.christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.com