Venus and The Sailor, 1925, by Salvador Dali |
We’re still dancing
We’ve danced all night and skipped rope together
You spinning double tied to the railings coated
in ice and then my hand
We’ve washed the dishes dried the dishes turned the dishes
over
You standing to swing
against the sky in the cold autumn night: some naughty children on the run
And still you love me amongst the baby carriages and the
flapping nappies and you’ve forgiven the passion-killer undies conceding defeat
in the face of comfort
Ones we shared when the bundle of shared existence was too
tight to separate for clean clothes or appearances
The shaken heads with wisdom telling it would never last
Never last once the lust had burned itself out
Still waiting
Still dancing all night
Thanks to Tess at Magpie Tales for the image and inspiration. Please read more here at http://magpietales.blogspot.com/
22 comments:
Oh this is lovely...I had to read it out loud to myself...thank you...such a treat...
How great to prove the doubters wrong! :)
i don't know why but this made me a bit teary.....it is a beautiful piece ...xx
too tight to separate for clean clothes...well now that is surely close...smiles...ha...the passion killer undies made me smile as well...really a lovely write...
sweet. cheers.
I love the skipping rhythm.
It's so good when love outlasts lust;-)
This si the theme I drew from the prompt too, but mine was a lot more flippant; yours is lovely.
This si the theme I drew from the prompt too, but mine was a lot more flippant; yours is lovely.
wonderful poem for the years spent together!
"passion killer undies" LOL! I kinda got hung up on her undies. too!!
Love the romantic element that love endures through the years.
A graceful and lyrical tribute to the endurance of love beyond passion.
Through thick and thin ! thanks-
Yes! Fun filled and romantic and with the message that the romance needs to be fed to remain alight.
The undies don't stay on for long, so who cares :). I like to thinks passion gets better with time, more liesurely, more intimate.
this is beautiful! beautiful indeed!...
same here, this poem made me think of my present relationship... and we will surely have more dance to do...
I love the positive vibe of your poem ... hope for happiness throughout years of sharing life.
Wonderful images in your poem Isabelle. I read it with the My Fair Lady tune running through my head. A tribute to forevermore...
Had to smile at the passion-killer undies.
Quite liked this!
=)
How lucky can you get..even with daily reality always knocking..YES!!
Isabel as Tess says you have to read it aloud as you read it has that natural flow
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