Wardrobe Misdemeanour
Now you are teasing me, punishing me – killing me
– all I asked for was a drink
O heavens pour then, skies rage, drown us!
Raven fly, leave me
Take messages
Sing!
Tell them never to forget the sky’s revenge
And feed my dragon
Sell my tampons
Divorce my husband and set my people free!
Or then again, keep silent
Can you swim?
x
26 comments:
That last line makes it.
Always be precise when making a request;-)
Yes, things may not turn out the way anticipated. Brave and beautiful verse!
Hank
I agree with kaykuala; brave and very beautiful indeed.
I can see divorce and freedom are two sides of the same coin, but tampons? Hmmm...
Be prepared..an umbrella next time! She is one independent thinker!!
dang...this gains a wonderful momentum through out...and love the strong voice...
Love the build in this... great last line!
Yes, I see her about to take the plunge too.
oh this was a curious one
but I enjoyed every word
Sell my tampons...love it...
'can you swim?' .... brilliant!
feed my dragon/Sell my tampons/
Divorce my husband and set my people free!!!! I love this! Thanks for the laugh:)
so unexpected.
all of it, quite new and strange.
I really like it.
I adore the structure. Pay attention, try to keep up! she might say. Very entertaining indeed.
Wonderfully original.
that was utterly surreal!
thanks for sharing
martine
Thanks for leaving your explanatory comment on my blog! Hehehe! I DO see where you were coming from now. ♥ Like birds of a feather may our quirky minds stick together...
Divorce my husband and set my people free!
Oh, how this lines brings back memories to me...LOL.
Thoroughly enjoyed your work!
loved it! made me laugh some, especially the last line!
Marvelous, simply freaking marvelous.
It makes my heart sing at super sonic volume.
rel
I LOVE this!!! Very different from your other poems. What kind of mood were you in?!!
Mad and bad Isabel! A bit of moonsoon madness going on in there.
Love it!
Anna :o]
Sick and slick--I love it!!
Ah, the Crow can do anything!
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