Thursday, February 16, 2012

The Sun, Veiled



The sun, veiled in dust,
 hangs tethered to the sea
Even such a barrage balloon
cannot stop the day unfurling.


x

7 comments:

Elisabeth said...

This is lovely, Isabel. I can almost see that rising/setting sun in my mind's eye.

Susannah said...

That is beautiful, I love it!

Dave King said...

Beautiful image. A real gem.

Yvonne Osborne said...

Beautiful in its simplicity, especially the first two lines. You've hung the sun right there for all to see.

I especially appreciate that with a gray, overcast, dreary morning approaching.

ninotaziz said...

Oh this is rich and simply stunning.

Just as the sun would be.

hyperCRYPTICal said...

A beautiful write Isabel.

Anna :o]

jabblog said...

I like the idea of the day unfurling.