Cupid Raging at the Heavens
What? Struck by my own arrows?
What sort of trick to play on the son of a goddess?
I never asked to be immortal.
I was safe in my tower, snickering – well maybe sniggering –
at the agony of my targets
Those afflicted by my darts, the vehemence of their moans!
Now I am wounded
My mind knows not these sighs
This fire – I never spared Man nor Woman – now the madness overcomes me
A divine wave, such as when the earth trembles,
sweeps me breathless and staggering
There is no bridge for this raging sea, no firm axis to stand on
The sky is alive with plagues and mists,
storms and tempests roar at Neptune’s behest
Jupiter laughs across the earth – it was Pluto who conspired against me
They all did, all the gods
Now they watch me suffer this chaos of dreams
The punishment of the world’s love
Bella, come to bed
Only your diamond heart’s kingdom can release me
I am vanquished, staggering under this burden
Only your savage love can heal my wounds and
Draw the arrow from my side
You deny me? This treachery – too much.
I die of love.
Image courtesy of Magpie Tales where more love awaits ...
17 comments:
Great passion in this. Excellent.
I enjoyed this take on the prompt - a nice romantic one this week!
Very nice ... Shakespeare would approve too.
WOW!! A great, unique take on the prompt. Full of powerful imagery, this is my kind of poem.
Thanks for sharing this, I shall no doubt be reading it a few more times yet to feel its full impact.
Love the idea behind this. Powerfully written, it reads very fluently.
Jamie
Potent and pleasing.
I really enjoyed it.
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ha cupid finally gets bit by his own...and does not know what to do with it...perhaps now he will be a bit more careful with who he shoots...smiles.
The biter bit! ♥
Yes... Cupid is wounded and confusions follows. This worked well.
Poetic justice in more ways than one...
Ouch! I really enjoyed this roller-coaster of passions.
Just the right degree of extremity, I thought. Well done, indeed.
For Cupid, a bit of his own medicine...endless love..what a punishment!! Very clever..
And plenty of opportunity to read between the lines.
And what are way to go! Has your Aya been lacing the lamingtons with beetle nut again? Take it easy Isabel...you know it's lust season in the tropics just before the monsoon hits...great isn't it!
Powerful, involving, impressive...
romantic
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